I have been considering the lines where there could be alternate symbols for a few days now and I have come to some decisions. The idea of the paper boats as a symbol appeals to me and from conversations I have had the feedback has tended to favor them over literal displayed waves from an oscilloscope.
However, after taking advice on the meaning of the line 'there is a tree that marks the places you've been ' I have decided that unless I can generate shots of an actual cross then there is no point of having a shot other than that of performance as the following line is going to be one of religious connotation. With the spilled chalice. Consequently at present it looks like I will stick with performance shots rather than synonyms.
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